what wrong here?

by oldelf16 on Aug 30, 2008 11:04 AM EDT Comment 10 comments

Been a Brownies fan since 1956------who knows whats going to happen----Anderen is iffy----Quinn hasn't shown me too much----defense is still up in the air----where's the bright spot?----Cribbs is hurt----JJ is out for weeks----will Winslow get into another ATV accident?----who knows? Where is the defensive coordinator?----sleeping?-----must be----Come on Romeo----get these guys motivated-----you did it in New England----why not in Cleveland?

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“What wrong here” is——your absolutely insane——writing style——and incoherence?

by DrewskiC on Aug 30, 2008 1:08 PM EDT reply actions 0 recs

Your should be you’re. If you are going to critcize other people’s writings, then you should watch your grammar yourself.

That being said, this post made absolutely no sense. Where did this person learn to write?

The best thing probably is to hit [Grady] 2nd -- Jay

by Buckeye Brad on Aug 31, 2008 1:47 PM EDT up reply actions 0 recs

They don

by Desroko on Aug 31, 2008 2:41 PM EDT up reply actions 0 recs

't teach much grammar at OSU?

The way you would have him write it, it would read “What’s wrong here is you are absolutely insane…”

by Desroko on Aug 31, 2008 2:42 PM EDT up reply actions 0 recs

Everyone, everyone….I know the dashes (for dramatic effect) likely made what I wrote a little confusing, but what I meant to say, sans dashes, was this: “What’s wrong here is your absolutely insane writing style and incoherence.” I believe that is grammatically correct.

Apologies for the confusion.

by DrewskiC on Aug 31, 2008 4:01 PM EDT up reply actions 0 recs

I see….I thought you meant “you are absolutely insane.” I never read the whole statement without the dashes as one sentence.

Probably why we don’t write with random dashes spread throughout our sentences.

The best thing probably is to hit [Grady] 2nd -- Jay

by Buckeye Brad on Aug 31, 2008 5:43 PM EDT up reply actions 0 recs

I thought it was perfectly clear what you were saying, and I certainly didn’t read “writing style” and “and incoherence” as independent sentences/thoughts.

by kwoog on Sep 1, 2008 5:47 PM EDT up reply actions 0 recs

It was a funny parody of the original poster’s ridiculous style, is all I meant. I chuckled Drewski.

by kwoog on Sep 1, 2008 5:48 PM EDT up reply actions 0 recs

Grammer aside. I too am not so optomistic about this coming year.
Tom many questions on a team that won 10 games last year.
I see 9-7 tops, thats if everything falls into place. I see alot of 37-24 games this year, and the Browns on the wrong side.

"Have You heard of the Boom on Mizar 5?"

by Grockcubs on Sep 2, 2008 5:23 PM EDT reply actions 0 recs